Prologue Done!!

Guys, pls doooo comment on my prologue.. its only a draft but it would be great if you guys could check it out.. As soon as you guys do ill work on the first chapter, and so forth.. enjoy reading! ive really tried to make the characthers pop into life, so forgive me if i took the liberty on names.. i havent been doing much reserch, anyway.. haha..have fun! and do forum me HERE.. ill try to make it link, tho im having problems with that.. catch u later!